Lil'Rachel and robot Thomdle INT.ROOM.HOME.CHILD Junked up room, full of old computer boards and miscellaneous mechanical parts. A bed can be seen, sitting on a shelf of old parts, high off the floor. The bed's left side is pressed against the wall. The sheets are patched and worn, its frame is wood and not well taken care of. At the foot of the bed, towards the right side of the scene, there is a makeshift ladder from the cluttered floor to the
Gin Chi - Intro - Failed Trans銀の一族この世界を理解する銀短剣の端に見つめ、あなたはその切れ味の深さを理解すると仮定ようなものです。一見すると、それは見事に武器のように見えるが、その後、パターンの複雑な詳細を刃の側面に刻ま参照してください。それは、それが終了傷を簡単に入力する刻
More notes for good writingA good story shouldn't leave the reader lost. There are 5 basic questions that need to be asked over and over, until the story is complete.Who: participating in the scene, speaking, acting, etc.What: What are they doing?Why: Why are they there? Why are they doing what they are doing? Why are you writing about this scene?Where: Where are they? With that is "When are they?" Modern stories are not easily recognizable as modern if there are a lot of metaphors. Make it clear. Like:In the time of dragons and great wizards.-or-While he sat on the front stoop of the apartment, he could hear the traffic on the overpass.This goes back to my first collection of rules, keep your story clear.