Lil'Rachel and Thomdle Pt 2 by *Grevor
OC Lil'Rachel CS Lil'RAchel CSOC Lil'Rachel CS by *Grevor
Character: Rachel
Full Name: Rachel
Description:
Sometimes called Lil'Rachel. She is a child about 9
years old. Though with some of her complaining, she
acts a little older. Whe she plays, she acts a little
younger.
In Scenes:
Act 1
1. INT.ROOM.HOME.CHILD
2. INT.ROOM.HOME.KITCHEN
3. EXT.BETWEEN MOUNDS OF BROKEN CONCRETE AND MACHINE
PARTS.
4. EXT. ENTRANCE TO THE ROBOT COMPOUND.
5. INT. INSIDE OF THE COMMUNE CAVERN ENTRANCE.
Detailed Physical Description
Age: 9
Hair: Red, long
Height: 4' 6"
Distinguishing Features: Little Red headed Girl
Eyes: Green
Weight
OC Minibot I Character Sheet OC Minibot I Character SheetOC Minibot I Character Sheet by *Grevor
by *Grevor
Character:
Minibot I
Tags:
Minibot 1.408912
Full Name:
Minibot 1.408912
Description:
Minibot is just that a really small bot, like a small rounded shoe
box. Without having a full understanding of human emotions, he tries
his best to take care of Rachel.
Schedule ID: Min
Motivation
What is the Goal of this Character?
To guide, teach, and take care of Rachel, while she is living in the
robot colony.
What is the Character's plan to achieve the goal?
Nag and repeat himself, alot.
Character Background
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Thomdle
Tags:
Thomdle
Full Name:
Thomble, Home pest control and general maintainance.
Description:
Thomdle is tracked unit, tanks tracks for legs, that stands no
more than 3' tall. His series of bots were built self aware, but
would gain fast impression from owner and family. In theory, this
would motivate them to do their job well above parameters. In
reality, they became nannies and nurses. This compassion circuit
made them very proactive unit for taking care of the household.
Most of them, after recieving family impres
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Who: participating in the scene, speaking, acting, etc.What: What are they doing?Why: Why are they there? Why are they doing what they are doing? Why are you writing about this scene?Where: Where are they? With that is "When are they?" Modern stories are not easily recognizable as modern if there are a lot of metaphors. Make it clear. Like:
In the time of dragons and great wizards.-or-While he sat on the front stoop of the apartment, he could hear the traffic on the overpass.
This goes back to my first
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Don't be afraid to work out conflict. When the story gets tough, your character needs to toughen up and grow. Don't be afraid of this. Write it through. How would you like to see it come to pass. Just don't skimp on the details.
Don't make excuses. If you are going to write, then, damn it, write. There are millions of unemployed writers with unrealize
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